Second phase of the paper

I’m reading your papers (not done yet). This is what I find (and these are general problems that concern most of the class). Papers are one-sided; the interaction of points of view is limited, too much insistence on religious arguments; lack of proper research, etc. I’m going to ask you for the second revision (which is due April 14) to fix those problems. 1- Add about six more paragraphs to the existing paper, 2- Try to embroider better the opposing sides, 3- Take your essay to a place where you can either give it a conclusion or leave it close to that point. If you have any questions, let’s talk it in class.